Haydn sonata E major, take 2

[pianisten1989]

I'll only post 1st mov., since I'm not allowed to play anymore on the auditions..

[birba]

Very well played.  The only objection I have are some of your arbitrary rits.  They just don't convince me.  Which makes me feel maybe you aren't either...
In general, ritards should be "in time", if you know what I mean.  Keep the proportion between slowing down, rests and fermatas. 
But, in general, it was very clean and musical.

[pianisten1989]

Aah! I hate you! .. No, I really don't! I really appreciate your advices.
Though, all my teachers've said different thing about that, and I really thought I did the rit right this time But I think I know what you mean, and will try to do that