overall I think you do a quite nice job. most of the major mistakes have already been pointed out by youtubers, so I shan't comment on them further. I think the main area where you could improve is in terms of adding more emotional content to this--it just feels a bit dry to me. this is beethoven after all, and one of his more dramatic works! listen to recordings by some of the great pro's side-by-side with yours and I think you will see what I am saying. you've done most of the work, now you just need some fine-tuning.
Topic: Beethoven - Moonlight sonata (3rd mvt)