Thanks for the additional comments.
Great to learn what philological means - on the embellishments, I was working from an Urtext score and there is no question that in this performance, I took a couple of liberties.
I did research what the literal markings, stayed true to most, but added 1 unmarked trill AND did not play two left hand trills that should have been 6 note trills, instead played 4 notes.
Here are the notes my very accomplished teacher sent me after viewing the video:
"1. It sounded a little too much. Maybe you can be a little bit more selective about what you do. I think it is hard to explain in email. Can I show you at our lesson?
2. I would try to layer the voices a little bit more, so one can hear the horizontal lines of each voice a little bit better.
Great work! Thanks or sharing this with me."
My teacher is right, in sections it is a bit too much - perhaps that was because I had to wrestle a bit with the Steinway D I was playing and time constraints-but those are lame excuses. I just need to bring in a bit more control and stay truer to the period.
I also agree on the horizontal voicing, I need to be more conscious of this and no be so focused on the RH melody.
I will be performing this live on May 24th in recital, and I will post a video of that performance for all of you.
Thank you so much for the feedback, please keep it coming. I have so much to learn.
Phil