overall, I'd have to say you did an excellent job. I didn't hear any major mistakes, and only one or two very minor note errors, which is quite impressive given the difficult nature of this work.
however, it felt a little bit lacking in emotional content. while you clearly have the technical ability to play this piece, you make it sound a little bit too easy. to me, this piece has a lot of tension, beginning with the opening chord, far away from the home key, and continuing throughout the entire sonata--even when we are firmly in the home key, we are made to feel not at ease. yet your playing is so smooth and even that I don't feel the fire and tempestuousness as strongly as I would like. I think you have the capability to do this, as evidenced by your playing beginning at measure 159, which sent shivers down my spine. I'd love to see you carry that level of emotional content throughout the movement.
most of all, I'd like to hear you play the other two movements! keep up the good work!
Topic: opus 31 no.2 Beethoven