Did the software play the piece for you? At least that is how it sounds: Dry, technical and metronomical.Try to 'sing' the piece in your mind and dont watch the sheetmusic. Or play with your eyes closed so you are forced to really listen to the music itself.Gyzzzmo
Good! I liked that. It's very difficult to keep the 16th notes even and you did a great job. What I don't understand is this steinway software thing. Were you playing on a piano? The sound WAS sort of "ready-made" and monotone. I could hear that "d" - doesn't really make that much difference, does it?