First, I hate how this is broken up on youtube, especially because it's cutting out a chunk of music! For my purposes I think it would be better if it were a single sound file.
What is underplayed in my experience is the ending you chose neglecting the big scales at the climactic moment, which is a pity.
not being used to the choices you make, for example, pedaling through the staccato A's as the drama unfolds.
Even if I'm not yet convinced by it, it is great to hear it from your viewpoint. Thanks for sharing!
it strikes me as a very quick performance