Not a bad effort given the short amount of time you have been playing and the recording quality sounds fine to me. I would suggest that you start to think about the different touches in the RH, at the moment it all sounds generally at the same level, for example the quicker notes need to be much more gentler and smooth and the long notes need to be sustained. The syncopation encourages that the Rh sound more stretched, not merely fitting in between the notes, I cannot put how to do this this in words effectively though. The emotion in the Rh needs to be understood, at the moment it sounds like procedure however I can see you have some volume control understanding and climaxes are somewhat brought out.Keep up your efforts!
Impressive, having in account that you only spent 4 months playing piano! It's obvious you are talented and you are getting also a nice tone on the piano.But you must be careful. This piece is perhaps too difficult for a beginner. I think it's a very common mistake choosing pieces that have a difficult greater that what we can afford at this moment (building the house by the roof instead of the ground). I'd advice you to play other pieces in order to acquire a good background. I recommend you playing pieces of 1st or 2nd grade such as the beautiful Burgmüller etudes Op 100 and such.Regarding the interpretation of this piece, it's true that this consolation is technically relatively easy if we compare it with the average corpus of Liszt's piano works but, in my opinion, it's still too much difficult for an only 4 months experience.- You must read the score carefully. You have some important reading mistakes that changes the original harmony.- You are not handling correctly the polyrhythm: two (melody) agains three (accompainment).- There are another rhythm errors. I think you are playing 16th notes as 8th, and you are losing the pulse when faster figures appears in the score.- The piece is, generally, too self-consciousness, with too many doubts.Believe me, playing easier pieces is not a step back. In my opinion is far better playing somethings "easier" but self confident and well played than playing something more difficult not well. You'll can play very well this and many other pieces but in the future. Be patient, don't waste your talent.Anyway, I encourage you to continue practicing. There were very good details.
Considering how long you have been playing, this is incredibly impressive! Do you play any other instruments or have any other music grounding? I work in solo piano composition and am self taught so I can hugely relate to the getting bored of the basic songs and exercises. I'm also not a great person to go to for technical and professional advice in the way of traditional classical piano, but what I would say is that while most people like to work from the basics, there's a minority that work in a different way. It also depends what you are playing for. If its just for pleasure, why not take on a challenge if you enjoy it more!Anyway, very impressive start and I wish you all the best with your piano playing no matter how you choose to go about it!Greg
Topic: UPDATED: NEW TAKE! Been playing for 4 months. Practising Consolation 3. 