I want to make a video response like Birba, but my printer doesn't work, so I can't get the score! I'll try again tomorrow! Though, I will only make an audio respons. My video camera suuuuucks
Greetings Littletune...Well... it's good to hear another few pieces from you. First of all... I'd like to say that from a performance aspect - these pieces sound a lot more polished. I really don't have much to say on them except for really, really tiny things. For the Kaj mi nuca planinca... If I'm not mistaken (since I haven't seen the sheet music)... you have the dotted quaver and semiquaver rhythms. To me they don't seem rhythmically secure enough. They sound a bit like swung quavers. Ensure that in each of them the first dotted quaver is three times longer than the semiquaver. As for the Minuet in G by Bach... the only thing I though was missing was maybe an ornamentation or something, especially on the first C# in the second half of the piece (RH). I thought it could do with a mordent or something. As for the second section dynamics. I like having the second part a little louder than the first. The melody sounds so much more uplifting than the first part, so I think it needs to reflect that.