I've also played this piece. I think it was my first classical one My first comment would be to try to find an actual piano, but then I read what you had written, so no need for that!So, my first real comment: I think you sit too low. When your left hand comes to rather high notes, you have to lean your entire body, which gives you a bad balance, and your right hand then gets too low, and it gets uneven, and this piece is all about even notes.Second: It needs to go a bit faster.It's a piece with not much of a melody, but with harmonies. If you play it too slow, it's like playing a melody that isn't there...Third: Don't be afraid of coming from above. Right now you're kind of stuck in the keys, and your hands get kind of surprised whenever they're "taking over" from the other hand. Slightly raise it a bit before it's supposed to play, and it will get a lot easier. Edit: I notices you do this on the last run, and it sounds a lot better when you do.Fourth: Good job, hope to see more videos soon