Hello pianostreetforumguys!

I'm a self-taught amateur who has been playing the piano for about 3 years. Lately (let's say the last couple of months) I've been trying to get a better grasp of the theory behind the music. I've read two books about the basics of composing & harmony and did some analysing practices, mostly on pieces I already could play. Some were way too complicated for my puny head (moonlight sonata 1st mov being one of them) but I was quite successful with some easier pieces.
Yesterday I gave the "Prelude in C Major by JS Bach" a try. I heard it with a friend by accident and some of the chord progressions sounded interesting, so I went off to work/study! At first I thought I was going to breeze trough it because the first page is pretty standard. However when I came to the second page I started to get quite confused. I worked about 5-6 hours trying to play (which is not really a challenge is it

) but most of all trying to understand the piece. Usually I would ask a friend of mine, who is a great guitarist, to take a look at it but alas! He's on vacation for a couple of weeks. I've been thinking a teacher would be really handy but sadly I really can't miss the money.
So I'm turning my hopes to this forum for some analysing help!

I'll add my edited sheet music to make things much easier. I did it with print screen and paint because this computer lacks quite a lot of software :p
- 1st page: I think it's pretty much correct. The * means the modulation to G.

- 2nd page: I'm not sure about measure 12, 13 & 14. I think he's using the E° as the VI of G to go to Dm from which it could be the II. Then doing the same with B° which would be VI of Dm and VII of C. The ** would mean it's in Dm buuuuuuut... I could be totally wrong here.

- Then measure 20, 21, 22 & 23 confuse me as well, mostly because of the chord in measure 22. At first I thought the C7 would be preparing to make a little trip to F but the chord in measure 22-23 kind of messes up that idea.Tbh I find diminished or augmented chords quite confusing in general

I'm always confused how I should interpret them. As it is, I just looked at them from C major perspective.

- 3rd page: I think its mostly correct. However because of my confusion at the end of the 2nd page, I might be interpreting the G's/C's in a wrong way. I'm looking at them in C major but because of the chord in measure 28... I could think it's actually in G. (As in to me it only makes sense as a diminished7th VII from G).

Soooo that's it. I'm mostly concerned about measures 12, 13, 14, 21, 22, 23 & 28. I'm not sure if anyone is up for it but my thanks in advance!!~~
