Good job Choo! The last time I saw a video here was your first one, obviously it's gotten alot better.
I'll point out some of the "problems" in my view- However, I think you did really well. And it's all subjective taste!

You miss one of the most important notes in bar 23, I'm not sure if it's due to you just forgot it or if it's not in your sheets. At the last note of that ornament, which ends in bar 23 on the first beat, it's supposed to be a D flat in the bass.
And I would advice to wait just a little little while, before ending that phrase.
Also, I don't think the ornaments are as convincing as they could be, I think you should play them (meassures 6 & 10) at the 4th beat. Personal opinion though. They are as free as you like.
But they need to be lighter, and more like a...say small breeze. If you know what I mean?
And try keeping the same tempo, if it's not by purpose: in measure 15!
One last thing I would think of, is at the end of you video, it says in my score to be mezzo forte, also just a little reminder! If you are one of those that prefers doing what the score says.
I remember somewhere a discussion in this thread about octave legato fingering, I'm not sure where I stand in this. But just try and stay low with your hands, so to speak. Before letting them drop into the keys, atleast in this piece.
Musicality is a mess to discuss though, since what for me is great and not so great, could just be the other way around for others.
But good job! It's coming along nicely imo~