OK. You play this very good.
Very Chopinesque, very expressively. Very good tone, sound etc...
Almost like a recording from the Golden Age of pianism.
I very much enjoyed listening to it.
UNTIL,
the forte assai section, where the theme is accompanied by octaves at the left hand.
From there on we have a brutal tone, the beautiful harmonies and inner voices are lost etc.etc.
IMO, you are doing really very good things with this piece.
Just begin the piece in more calm and relaxed manner and again think of the final section in a broader way.
Anyway, as I said, I very much liked your playing, thanks for sharing.
regards,