In new old out video-Chopin op10-1 waterfall

[johnmar78]

Folks, this is my 2nd attemp tonight. And a improved version of my last take a months ago. Compare it and tell me if its true

This is the result of metronome

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All feedbacks are welcome as I tried to improve further,.,

Thanks

[hakki]

Congratulations!!
Of course there is improvement.
This version is better than the previous.
And if you continue to work slowly it will eventually get even better.

But still considerable number of notes are missing or not articulated enough that they sound weak compared to neighboring notes. At this stage I would recommend using some arm weight so that the volume of each note is comparable. Also playing with metronome would really help.

Good luck with this very difficult etude.

regards,

[candlelightpiano]

Very nice, John!  Your second attempt is definitely an improvement!  Keep up the good work!

[costicina]

Good job, John!!! Your patience and perserverance will be rewarded, I'm sure. And your approach is the right one with such demanding pieces. Keep strong!!!!

[rachfan]

Hi John,

You've worked very hard on this etude.  There are some barely sounding weak notes, and some minor slips on other notes.  The evenness of articulation is considerably improved.  So overall, it's definitely better in my opinion.  At this point I would put this piece away and let it percolate for awhile.  When you return to it in a few months, it will seem easier to you, and some problems will seem to have resolved themselves.  Very good.

David