A beautiful piece to be sure, unified in form by the poignant, recurring descending figure, and by the little upward harmonic sequences of the sort I remarked about in the other improvisation. Again, as in that one, strong interest attaches to the asynchronous contrapuntal effect of displaced accents. I appear to lack altogether this ability, shared by you and pianowolfi, to play music in direct and appropriate response to life events, a consistency of real emotion and it's expression in music. I can play in response to something but the musical content bears no resemblance at all to the stimulus. Oh well, as pianowolfi said, we ought to celebrate our differences, they make things more interesting.
Wow, what an incredibly beautiful creation! I felt that you were letting the ideas flow, and managed to give each idea the time it needed to blossom, yet you also managed to keep a sense of structure - everything felt tied together nicely. I'll certainly be giving this repeated listenings.