There, why don't you play everything like this?! Even though it's not perfect, one can at least give critique. The first one is quite good, but waay to heavy. The low register and the high register are two different things, but you treat them as the same. And don't be scared to take a bit of time before the jumps. It actually just adds to the music.The second one was better. You had some nice colors. Though, every time there there is some sort of long line, you get stuck. Say, around 1.00. Try to find something to do.