Could use some feedback on this

[stewart]

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Thank you for your time!

[starstruck5]

This piece begins very simply and in a minimalist style -then it transitions into  neo-Rachmaninoff . The music isn't bad at all -I am just not sure if the diversity of style in the same piece is convincing -I didn't listen to all of the piece because of it -it felt like two different pieces actually -I would like to hear you develop this consistently -either develop the first theme -or rewrite it to fit better with the Romantic style -

[stewart]

Thanks for the input and advice! I feel that this is my weakest piece so far.