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Offline firefinch

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My first toccata
on: August 20, 2012, 09:17:59 PM
This is my 1st toccata for piano. in the style of Beethoven.
https://soundcloud.com/firefinch/toccata-in-dm

Any feedback?

Offline asuhayda

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #1 on: August 20, 2012, 09:30:21 PM
Excellent Key sig choice!  :)
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Offline davidjosepha

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #2 on: August 20, 2012, 10:14:57 PM
Next time, be sure to post in the Audition Room.

I really like the piece though! Could I have a look at the sheet music?

Offline proklover

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #3 on: August 21, 2012, 01:23:20 AM
I love it!!! im actually trying to compose a sonata/ dance /toccata-esque type thing right now. I really like this piece, its really good and sounds a lot like beethoven
"That's why I say 'seem', rather than 'to be'-because seeming is art's job and measure."

Offline firefinch

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #4 on: August 21, 2012, 08:16:04 AM
Next time, be sure to post in the Audition Room.

I really like the piece though! Could I have a look at the sheet music?

If anyone wants the score let me have your e-mail and I can send you a pdf or a jpeg of it.
my email - robbyhaha@aol.com

Offline davidjosepha

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #5 on: August 21, 2012, 12:59:38 PM
If anyone wants the score let me have your e-mail and I can send you a pdf or a jpeg of it.
my email - robbyhaha@aol.com

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Offline emrysmerlin

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #6 on: September 10, 2012, 12:52:08 PM
Very nice...I'd say the style would be closer to Rachmaninoff with all the chords and the flashy bits, but overall it's of excellent quality. Keep up the good work!!

Offline nocturnetr

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #7 on: October 21, 2012, 09:26:27 AM
That was... Astonishing...

Offline megadodd

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #8 on: October 22, 2012, 09:13:46 AM
Superb at the least
Repertoire.
2011/2012

Brahms op 118
Chopin Preludes op 28
Grieg Holberg Suite
Mendelssohn Piano trio D minor op 49
Rachmaninoff Etude Tabelaux op 33 no 3 & 4 op 39 no 2
Scriabin Preludes op 1

Offline faulty_damper

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 11:02:14 AM
This is my 1st toccata for piano. in the style of Beethoven.
https://soundcloud.com/firefinch/toccata-in-dm

Any feedback?

One annoying thing was the rhythm didn't match during the descent.  It felt missing.  I guess if it were performed by a human, he might shape it so that it does feel so chunky.

Offline emrysmerlin

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #10 on: October 23, 2012, 02:07:43 PM
One annoying thing was the rhythm didn't match during the descent.  It felt missing.  I guess if it were performed by a human, he might shape it so that it does feel so chunky.

I agree with the first part, it does degrade the overall impression of it being a completed work. Maybe firefinch could fix it?

As for the latter bit, I must say, although it may be just an inaccurate description, but I do believe it says "composed and performed by R.Goldfinch"? Perhaps it's just that firefinch played it and recorded it on a digital keyboard with a digital software that makes it sound computer-generated?

Offline firefinch

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Re: My first toccata
Reply #11 on: November 28, 2012, 12:49:51 AM
Thanks for your comments :)
I did play it.

Here is a live version -
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