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Offline ralpi

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Sad piano (Very Emotional) first composition
on: January 20, 2013, 10:28:14 AM
Very good people!
I'm new here and I've been playing the piano (digital) from something more than two months and I have decided to make my first composition ;)
It is a somewhat sad theme with accompanying pictures so I would like me what you think the theme ;D
From already thank you very much and greetings to all

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RYQMTbHpg-A

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Re: Sad piano (Very Emotional) first composition
Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 12:57:38 AM
it's a lot better than my first composition ::):https://www.pianostreet.com/smf/index.php?topic=49475.0
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Re: Sad piano (Very Emotional) first composition
Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 11:54:20 AM
it's a lot better than my first composition ::):https://www.pianostreet.com/smf/index.php?topic=49475.0
Really?
To me it seemed pretty good and even your composition reminded me some film clips  ;D
Anyway thanks friend  ;)

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Re: Sad piano (Very Emotional) first composition
Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 01:20:58 PM
Ya know it's rather nice, good job ! However, it's sad because the pictures are sad. You could make it joyful or even lullabyish with matching pictures in those themes. I get in my mind when I just listen to the music and not watch the photos, a very young child seeing new things for the first time. The wonder on their faces sort of thing, not sad kids starving and dirty, for instance. Put the music to better use or I should say better calibrated use ( just a suggestion) !
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Re: Sad piano (Very Emotional) first composition
Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 02:15:23 PM
Ya know it's rather nice, good job ! However, it's sad because the pictures are sad. You could make it joyful or even lullabyish with matching pictures in those themes. I get in my mind when I just listen to the music and not watch the photos, a very young child seeing new things for the first time. The wonder on their faces sort of thing, not sad kids starving and dirty, for instance. Put the music to better use or I should say better calibrated use ( just a suggestion) !
Thanks hfmadopter
As for what the images are not sure what to put wise as I am still new in this area because those elected. For the next will try to make better  ;D
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