If it would help, I could put a video online of my right hand playing this part.
Apparently W T F comes out as what.
what? Can you easily tremolo in thirds with (4 - 5)? You're getting tired because you're using (1 - 4) for the (E - C#). For me the only way to do this is:(1 - 2) for (C# - A)(1 - 3) for (E - C#)
I've uploaded a couple of videos.
My understanding though is that it's supposed to be the thumb and the inner fingers that are louder, and the pinky soft...
...haven't really worked at the voicing yet -- since I'm still trying to get the right hand position down.
I'm not "purposely" moving the 2nd and 3rd fingers though -- they're moving more just due to my thumb trying to reach the lower notes in between my pinky going for the high E; it's just my natural stretch between my thumb and the inner fingers, and the inner fingers and my pinky, that makes them move around. I'm not sure how I'd move them less.
Just wanted to clarify a bit on the release: Do you mean that I should focus on making the note durations shorter, or that I should focus on "snapping" the hand/fingers more when I play the notes? (Or both.) Right now when I play, I sort of snap the right hand toward the left to play the lower notes, then "relax" back to the right for the high E with the pinky.
I think this is up to interpretation. I only bring out the inner fingers. Basically the pinky and thumb are whisper quiet, but still audible.
For me separating hand position and voicing causes problems. If I do them separately, I end up with hand positions that enable me to hit the notes very easily, but with fingerings that make it uncomfortable to voice the way I want.
I think you are lifting your 2nd finger and especially your 3rd finger way too much. Some pianists lift a lot and can play forever no problem. I'm not one of them. I could play the passage we're discussing in tempo if I lifted as much as you or even more than you, but that would probably cause me strain and affect my playing for a few seconds afterwards. I guess there are a few seconds for recovery as you play the arpeggiated chords before you do the scales...
Out of curiosity, have you tried playing from the Friska to the end in tempo? Also, are you doing a cadenza?
Anyway, so after practicing a bit, I've attached what it sounds like now. Unfortunately I was somewhat distracted by trying to look at the camera screen and directly at my right hand so it was somewhat more uneven than without trying to record it (since I hold the camera with my left hand while playing with my right). I think my pinky is staying on the high E more than is necessary, but I'm not sure if that needs to change or not, since it's softer now.
While the behavior of your hand has improved, you are still reaching too much.
Second, I suspect it's been more than enough for the mechanical training.
P.S.: As for the sound: don't play the piano too much. Liszt imitates a Hungarian gypsy band, and they mostly use violin, guitar, cimbalom (a light percussive instrument) and double bass.
Realistically I won't likely do a cadenza, but instead I'll be modifying some of the sections, such as a Horowitz-like recapitulation of the themes played simultaneously near the end.