Nicely done.
Timing is good generally but the tempo fluctuates a little. Those last semiquavers in the bass are semiquavers, not the quavers you played. You can do a rit, but don't change the note values.
Thank you very much!
The tempo fluctations need to go, but I hope they go away in a few months after the piece is fortified with more practise. This piece is grade 5 but I think it will take me months before I can play it with the correct tempo and all. It is very taxing for me at this stage.
Is a rit the downfall of notes in the end? I went a bit over the top with improvising at the end, sorry. I entirely forgot the bass notes/was ignorant of them. Once again, forgive this fool for his ignorance. Bach is blessed and needs to be treated so.
