Is that really the sort of playing one usually hears to accompany drinking and talking where you are, or is the title tongue in cheek ?
Your main strength here is coherent, meaningful phrase articulation. It is easy, once we have a bit of technique and vocabulary, to pour forth cascades of sound which say very little, to play notes rather than music. A lot of famous players actually do this quite often, I think, but we shan't enter that argument here.
You could possibly try making your passage work more heterogeneous by adding or subtracting notes, or grouping them in sections whose cycles are asynchronous with whatever else is going on.
Thanks. I think it's the sort of thing I'd play in hotel lobbies if I were left to my own devices! I wouldn't want to make an entire album out of stuff like this though: after a while I can get a bit harmonically same-ish.
Then for contrast improvise a Serialist version of cocktail music!
Ha, I was once asked to construct a tone row and improvise on it. It didn't go terribly well, particularly as I was having trouble keeping the row in my head!