Your recording is great and I very much enjoyed it. I am not an expert and you very well may play this piece better than me, but having played it makes my ear more keen and I can tell you the effect your interpretation had on me.
Your technicality is good; the 16th notes were played pretty evenly. You are looking for feedback so here are my suggestions!
A - Right hand starts out louder than intro. Intended? Recording issue? This section felt rushed at times. Not that the tempo is too fast, but my ear wanted to linger longer on areas where you had slight ritard and from my perspective, could have left it there a little longer. At times seemed like right hand was trying to catch up with your left in areas where right hand would be more comfortable playing the notes slower. I liked your increase in intensity in the octave part.
B - I like the way you played this section the most. You showed a lot more patience and confidence in this section. I would have liked to hear the trills be more delicate and ornate and transition more smoothly to their attached note. I liked how you kept the left hand delicate so that the right hand could be the star of the show. Rubatos here much slower and with natural flow.
A - I agree. Section A sounded more controlled second time around. With technicality achieved, you could work on the dramatics!

C - The left hand currently sounds like a march and I would suggest phrasing the left hand with legato and softer as in section A, but you don't have to. Also making contrasts in the fast part from forte to piano could be powerful and dramatic. In the major section, at times the right hand overpowers the left melody, so making sure that the left hand is supported and given its moment. The soft pedal can help with giving this section the gentleness of a hopeful, rising sunset! lol
Altogether I really liked the way you played! Keep it up!