A couple of things:
You seem to hesitate in places which interferes with the fluidity and tempo.
It seems to be when the left hand has to jump down an octave.
I hope that makes sense - I cant put my hands on the sheet music or I'd be more specific.
Its almost as if you're stopping to look where the left hand is meant to go when it has to jump out of your line of sight.
I don't think its deliberate because its not consistent - sometime you do, sometimes you don't.
Another thing is that the recording isn't great.
Maybe its my headphones, but it kinda sounds like the piano is out of tune.
Which seems unlikely since its digital lol.
Also thought I spotted a few mistakes but on listening again I put that down to a mixture of the recording, my bad memory and the amount of coffee i've drunk.
Other than that I liked it.