My first attempt at transcribing, how did I do?

[pure1108]

The song is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2fzW4ja29lw#t=2m40s

8 Bars starting from 2:40



I would appreciate any advice!

[chopinlover01]

You'd probably get better results at this site.
They transcribe music as well, albeit strictly from video games, but you can get lots of transcribing/arranging advice over there.

[pure1108]

Thank you for the advice, I'll try there!

[rob47]

hi

i think you did well

maybe consider notating it in one of these ways?



also maybe the key signature could be 3 sharps or no sharps (a+, a-)?