Overall, I think this is good! (lmao, I sound like a piano teacher)
I think the change of harmony/color at around 0:38 is very special (it doesn't take a Sherlock Holmes to feel it), and should probably be brought out more clearly as such.
Also, it seems like some technical difficulties got in the way with the overall structure of the piece (though I couldn't have done much better myself, and have almost the exact same problems in my playing). For example, your phrases, more often that not, start with a "hesitation" in timing. A lot of ritenutos also coincide with big jumps in the LH- this is most apparent in some of the sequences (somewhere in the middle of the piece

). At times, these "hesitations" precede new figures in the music, and make it seem to appear out of context.
Tl;dr it's good; just be extra-sensitive to color changes + work on technique/less "hesitating" to make phrasing more direct and intense