Epic music composed with sibelius (orchestral work i composed)

[rachconcerto]

This is a piece i composed with sibelius 7.5 . Critics and suggestions are welcome ! But plz take into consideration that i have never taken any theory or composition courses and i am a 17 yrs old advanced piano student (6 yrs).link below

[themeandvariation]

The sound is balanced…and works.. it might be interesting to see where you might go from where you left off.. (how and if you decide to modulate) . 
 Theory can be helpful in revealing options, and blind spots, but it can't (really) write the piece for you… Reminiscent of Hans Zimmer, yes?

[rachconcerto]

You are right. I admire Hans Zimmer  But the motif played by violas in the beginning is used in many works for action movies and video games. The piece is intended to be used in series/movies' opening credits so it has to be short in length.

[francoisfj]

Really nice! I'd be very interested too see more of your works especially the longer ones

[rachconcerto]

Thanks ! I will soon publish a piano concerto i am working on and one other work like this one.