Hi Daniele,
You're doing a really good job here, lots of nice expression. I like how you seem to be thinking a lot about shaping your lines. I hope you won't mind me sharing a couple of comments.
1 - Swell more on those introductory quadruplets. You didn't at all on the first one, then did it some on the second. Instead, do some on the first, and REALLY shape it the second time those two figures come about.
2 - It seems you have the wrong rhythm on those opening octaves. A few notes before you resolve the big phrase there's supposed to be an eighth rest and then an eighth note that leads into the last few quarters. It looks like this
https://gyazo.com/6afce00d86bcb26aaf47b0e82d9bdd39 That eight note really gives this piece an extra sense of angst and agitation, please don't leave it out because your playing is very good and that quality will only add to it.
3 - In the choral section those chords feel a TAD slow. It seems like you switched tempo from the first section very subtly. Its hard to notice but its a difference. Just turn on your metronome and make sure it all lines up. You don't have to play metronomicly, I advise against that haha. Just make sure you're keeping a steady pulse
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4 - The coda felt a bit safe (this piece is new for you so its totally understandable.) the previous sections had more intensity than the coda and I think it needs to be the other way around. Chopin wrote this during a time of his life when he was having nightmares. This section is like an outbreak of insanity. For the most intense and even scary rendition of the coda of this piece check out Daniil Trifonov. The way he plays it sends chills up my spine.
Great job, Daniele! This is really sounding great and I'm proud that you're playing this at such a young age. Imagine how you'll play it in 10 years if you keep in your repertoire. You're already really thoughtful with it so keep up the good work. I wish you all the best in your performance!
- AJ
Topic: First Try Chopin Scherzo no.3