Good fun and a decent transcription. Sounds like one of those pieces that should be played in smoky cafe-bars late at night - I can imagine this being exactly the sort of material Cziffra improvised on during his pre-fame period in Budapest. Your mics sound like they may be a little close (for pure classical) but this isn't pure classical, so perhaps the sound characteristics I'm hearing (more prevalent in the treble) are actually quite appropriate.
Hi visitorThis sounds like a fun piece to play. The arrangement is quite good too. I believe you have the notes, melodic line, rhythm, and articulation. Just a couple of suggestions: See if you can observe all of the dynamic changes in the score and then add them into your memorization. That will provide more contrasts, which also could be improved by using half and quarter pedals. Those items would improve expression throughout your playing. To maintain an effective expression, always listen closely to your own playing. Thanks for sharing this music. Keep up the good work!David
Visitor, This is really wonderful piano playing by you. Thank you so much for sharing with us. The piece is lovely as well. Best,AJ