Unending Lullaby - original piano piece

[sergeidave]

Hi guys,

Here I am again, with a new composition for the piano. Please check it out if you have a minute or two and let me know what you think!

Thank you very much!
-- David

[josh93248]

Okay, it's certainly not bad, not bad at all, just completely not my style.

To my ears and tastes it sounds overly sweet and a bit trite.

However I decided to look at the Lacrimoso Waltz too. It's better, it has a few similar issues but to me it has more interest and expression within it.

Anyway, I wouldn't give up, see what you can attract, this may not be the most receptive environment for what you want to do but you never know, you might find a few people here appreciative.

[sergeidave]

Thank you very much for the feedback, Josh! I appreciate it greatly!

I absolutely do not want to be a pest, so I'll probably stop posting my compositions in this forum. However, whenever I get some time to record a classical piece performance, I will absolutely ask for some feedback here!

Thanks!
-- David