Have you studied composition? It just seems like you use pop progressions of like 20 30 years ago. The musical motion is not interesting to people here but mind suffice to people with less musical education like 60 year old grandmas who like whatever.
Its really square, and doesnt really go anywhere.
Like I could look up and find 10 pieces which would not be any much different than this.
Analyze Beethoven, Rachmaninoff and other composers, their harmonic progressions.
At this point this sounds like playing by ear something off a melodrama.