Not very happy with 0:38-0:50.. still can`t decide what I want to do there.
Always a pleasure listening to your music. Such vitality in your playing.One of my past teachers would have said: pick a direction and go with it. There is no need to cement your decision, so if on another day you feel like doing something different do that instead. Seems like you are considering shaping the smaller motifs here. If you decide to go that way, you need to make it obvious, like you intended it to be that way.Your 35 and 45 trills are fantastic!
This is very good! Only around 0.36 do you seem to have any problems, the thirds sound a bit messy. Around 3.30 is incredibly agile.