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Original Piano Composition: Nocturne (Read 451 times)

Offline mozarta

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Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
« on: February 22, 2021, 11:06:52 AM »
Hi,

I have posted a piano composition called "Nocturne" (in a melancholic and contemplative genre) if you want to check it out and let me know your opinion.

Thanks.


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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2021, 05:15:35 PM »
Cool piece and nice playing! Make sure to post more :)

If I'd give one piece of feedback it would be that sometimes harmonies mix where I think I'd preferred if you changed the pedal, so you have a clean pedal when there is a new harmony.


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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #2 on: February 22, 2021, 05:33:36 PM »
Thanks for the comment and detailed feedback! I appreciate it.

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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #3 on: February 22, 2021, 11:43:16 PM »
Pretty tune.

I think if you have the intention of smearing harmonies you need to make it more obvious.  Otherwise, it would be advisable to change the pedal when you change to a new chord.  Bass notes sustain longer, so they also have a tendency to blur more without a pedal change. 
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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2021, 12:12:43 AM »
It reminds me of Richard Clayderman.

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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #5 on: February 26, 2021, 07:14:40 AM »
Very nice! I should attempt composing a piece myself, thanks for the inspiration!

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Re: Original Piano Composition: Nocturne
«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2021, 09:54:13 AM »
Thanks a lot for the detailed comments and glad if this piece did inspire you!