Super cool and great playing! Never heard this piece before, thanks for sharing.
If anything, I think you could reflect on the tempo changes (Moderato-con moto-presto etc). Would it be possible to make the difference greater?Also, there are a some ppp-markings which you don't do (e.g. in the first con moto-bit, where it would be nice as a contrast to the preceding and following forte)
I also didn't know this piece before, sounds very nice, some sections remind me of the fourth moment musical if the parts for each hands were inverted.
I know it’s hard to play really quiet in some sections.