Just to share my performance

[justinghoul]

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[anacrusis]

Well done!! This Etude is not easy. I think you already know that there are some mistakes. To clean them up, I think you both need just slow work (you're playing it quite fast now) and just improving your understanding of technique and this Etude in general - which takes time.

[dw4rn]

Bravo!
I agree with anacrusis that you need more slow practice. Also perhaps some sessions when you play this at a sort of comfortable tempo, really experimenting with the music - listen to the harmonic progressions, think about where phrases start and end, where you can change the sound and dynamics etc.
As far as technique is concerned, I think you are very capable of playing this piece. It's just that you need to spend quite a lot of time getting it fully under your hands, and also to make it musically enjoyable. So often, this is played like some sort of mindless acrobatic exercise. You are already showing signs of wanting to do something more - thanks for that!