Well done! I think it has an enjoyable calmness to it, it was a great pleasure to have your recording on while I was doing some things around the house!
We can always develop more control! Unless we are like Yuja Wang or something
Ornaments in baroque music are very much according to taste. Like it's good to know the ornament table that Bach made (it's usually included in basically all Bach editions I have seen) to know what notes to use to start and terminate the various ornaments, but apart from that you have a lot of freedom.
I thought it could be faster when I listened, but that is also a subjective question of taste. There are very slow recordings of the Aria so I thought you were going for the same thing.
I certainly felt this was too slow and the repeats are a bit pointless without variation (ignoring different mistakes!).I've been playing it from memory for quite a while now, but ought to go back and read it more carefully. I've also tried playing it to metronome, which at the moment just confuses me more, but I should stick at that - and listen to some of the more rigidly-timed recordings (even MIDI) - to clarify what is actually intended to go where. And I need to keep develop more control.
Thanks for this recording lettersquash, like the others I also found it very enjoyable. It has this meditative, almost hypnotic quality that I think many are looking for in this music.Having said that, I see what you mean when you say you need to go back to the score and read it more carefully. There are several question marks when it comes to your rhythm, which may explain why you get confused when playing to a metronome. But I'm sure you don't need to listen to any MIDI-recordings to correct this - please don't!You were also saying that you are aiming for a slow tempo, but that you need more control to achieve that. That is probably true, but what you also need is a greater sense of direction. There are bits in this recording where you play beautiful phrases, but there are also bits where I find that there is no connection between the notes whatsoever. I think practicing in a faster tempo will help you find the longer lines. Then you can go back to experimenting with a slower version.