1. The Db followed by C# two measures later. Should you avoid using the same note but different notation?
2. G# and A# instead of A and B. Isn't it better to use the note of the main key?
3. The piece seem to have sharp, flat and natural all over the place. It's giving me aneurysm reading it. Shouldn't you need to keep accidentals to a minimum and keep it one direction preferbly the same as the main key (in this case keeps mostly flat)? I would rather the score make it easier to read first, any type of music theory or mode change should be outside the score and analysed later.
thank you I'm not a good reader, I'm barely over one year. So I have not played in all scales yet, I know the notes in B major but I wouldn't know why it modulates to B or why G# and A# means modulated to B and not other keys. I have only learnt the basic theory, so I want to know if my difficulty reading was because of my own shortcoming or the way my friend notates the piece. I want to give some feedback after learning it, he wrote it many years ago in highschool anyway so he might not even have these types of errors anymore.