feedback on rach Musical Moment n. 4

[sleepye]

Hi, Im new to this forum. Im not working with my teacher atm (just finished my computer programming program at college so im not sure of my ability to afford lesson right now).

i am working on Rachmaninoff musical moment n.4 by myself so i dont really have anyone to check my blind spots.
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i tried posting to reddit forums but they are kind of dead lately so its hard to get much feedback.
Someone mentioned that they dont know if its my piano or audio quality but it sounds a bit "loud and in your face"

Im not sure if that is because of my interpretation or not (i wanted a bit of a more punchy interpretation but im not sure if it has strayed from being correct)

Also i can probably benefit from more metronome practice so ive been doing that in the meantime.

Any advice would be greatly appreciated, thanks.