I believe the main rule being violated by two dissonances in your example would be that the first dissonace is not followed by a consonance. In strict counterpoint a dissonance is only allowed if it is followed by a resolution or other consonanace.
Back in the day I was a music major at a community college and Fux was the textbook for the counterpoint class, so it's quasi official. Plus, it was used by generations of students since its original publication including Mozart and Beethovan if I remember correctly.Later on I studied conterpoint on my own using Arnold Schoenberg's "Preliminary Exercises in Counterpoint". It follows Fux's treatise in that he starts with First Species and moves to more complex ones in the same way. The advantage is the modern style of writing. He also urges the student to try every possible cobination to see what works and what doesn't and he has numerous examples (both good and bad) throughout the book with notations as to why this or that example doesn't work.
I hope this helps and I hope you enjoy counterpoint as much as I did.
"n this species a dissonance may not occur, except by diminution, i.e. filling out the space between two notes that are a third distant from each other".
However, if the only acceptable dissonance in this species is filling out the scale between two consonances a third apart (diminution), then your example fails on that point.