Hi Gargamel, I really like your improvisation! Its very dark and atmospheric
2:12: nice contrast! you're going along very dark and atmospheric and then a big major chord!
2:51 has a nice rising chromatic voice in the left hand, I liked this
-Late in minute 3 there are some nice low chord passages...I really like this sort of stuff.
minute 5 has a lot of really great chords in it...nice
I notice you use almost constant pedal. In the context of this particular improvisation, it sounds great---this sort of slow, atmospheric playing lends itself well to sostenuto playing.
A very good thing about your playing is your harmonic adventurousness.
Suggestions for your playing in general (many of these I should follow more often, myself actually)
- try recording some improvisations with less pedal (or rhythmic use of the pedal perhaps), and greater variety of tempo.
-when you practice improvising try to play a passage, and then remember most of what you played so you can devleop it further. This gives the listener's ear thematic material to latch onto.
-build your vocabulary of techniques by learning some scales and arpeggios (for example). Make up repeatable, memorizable patterns in these, and they will eventually become a flexible part of your vocabulary.
Hope that helps!
out of curiosity are you a fan of metal?