in need of major help

[2xtreme619]

im trying to learn heroic polonaise! and its not going to well, ive only learnt a bit! keep in mind my mic is bad, my piano needs a tune and its old, its in a small room which makes the sound cr*p and it all affects it, i can play better on other pianos but this will have to do for practicing at home! this piano makes me feel like i have no control and im not good, well no more excuses here is  a recording please listen to it and tell me where im going wrong, theres probably alot but i want to improve this! (this is my first big song im used to small songs that require not much skill so i need to get experience)

i dont know which link to give but try these!
https://s9.yousendit.com/e.aspx?id=0VY8WLIXPQL0B32ZMIU1K6DMT4
https://s9.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0VY8WLIXPQL0B32ZMIU1K6DMT4
https://d9.yousendit.com/D/0VY8WLIXPQL0B32ZMIU1K6DMT4/help.wav

ps: where i stopped is the bit im having difficulty on, that bar is weird! any advice

thanks

[2xtreme619]

so there is no critisism at all, surely theres about 100 things i can improve on lol

[janice]

Give it a day or so for members to listen to it!  They will!  (Except for me, because my speakers don't work and I don't feel like getting them fixed because a)  don't want to spend the money, and b) I've lived without them for all this time that I forgot what I'm missing out on!)

[ryan2189]

Besides the sound of your piano, the piece sounds pretty good. As for the mistake at the end, all I would say is give it time to develop. Analyze that section and find out what you are doing wrong.  Also, if your looking for more suggestions, post this recording in the audition room.

[2xtreme619]

yeh i was giving it time, but i was hoping for one thing to improve on because i needed to play it for some teacher in class for something, but thanks ill post it in the audition section too