Very good! I liked your tempo, rubato, phrasing and tone in general. My only complaint is that the chords in the middle section may be just a little too loud and out of proportion with the rest of the piece, considering the mood of the music. (this is Debussy after all). In general, when playing it myself, I adopt a slightly slower tempo and a fuzzier sound - but that said, your approach is equally valid. I enjoyed this recording!