Inviting (Original)

[justliam]

Hey guys, I wrote this for a friend of mine, she is singing and I am playing piano, let me know your thoughts and any suggestions, cheers

[justliam]

No one like it then? lol

[ted]

Yes, I listened to it last night and found it attractive. The recording quality and method, however, may have to be adjusted. I found the singing too distant and cold (the recording I mean, not the voice itself) in relation to the piano, and thought a warmer and more intimate quality would have better lent itself to the song.

The music itself I found interesting and I look forward to hearing more of your songs.

[justliam]

Thanks ted, I have about 50 million different versions of it on my computer with different reverbs and stuff and the one I put was kinda random, thanks for your comments