someone's been practicing on the forum. i hear a lot of 'waves.' i kind of wish you would 'connect the waves,' if you know what i mean. that comes with another 3 wekks of practice. that's all. you are really talented. maybe saving the 'peaking' phrases for two to three places and the rest don't pause quite so much at the top. not necessarily played metronomically - but more of a steady feel through a page. hope i'm not way off. it's been a while since i've played any liszt at all. (i just hear little pauses here and there and want to feel 'pulled into the ocean' body and all, not a leg and an arm here and there).