Great job!
The opening quarter note staccato chords aren't short enough for my taste. Are you using an "UP" gesture? I want to hear them played very crisp and quick, just my opinion.
Be sure to play as legato as possible (as much as you can WITHOUT pedal) where the slurs are marked. This is difficult when your right hand has octaves (m. 35, 37, 39 etc.). Try connecting the top notes of the octaves with fingers 5 and 4, or whatever fits the keys and your fingers.
Middle lyrical section: listen to the 3rd left hand chord in each measure (beat 4). Don't accent it or hold onto it.
m. 129-137 make sure you don't slow down here. You're probably aware of this, but just work on keeping the same tempo as you lead up to it.
I enjoyed hearing you play this piece! Great job!
