The rhythmic variety is pleasing, if a trifle motoric for my taste. As this is probably deliberate in this particular piece, my preferences are of little significance one way or the other in any general sense. The one or two sudden changes in harmony were effective and I found myself wanting to hear many more of them. In this type of playing I don't think it matters where the harmony goes as long as change occurs; a sweeping statement, but probably true nonetheless. In other words, the usual restrictions to related keys, conventional progressions and so on can largely be forgotten in the interest of spontaneous impulse. The chord vocabulary in the twelve positions has to be at the fingertips though.
There is indeed a similarity of certain parts of it to early Jarrett, and it is true that yours is the more appealing, at least in the short term, simply because it changes more frequently and you do not "grind". It might pay to spend time on your finger work as I feel crystal clear, perfect finger strokes enhance rhythmic cells of this type more than legato, weight driven groups. In the end, however, the choice is in the hands of the player.
I look forward to hearing further and perhaps varied work from you.