haha there seems to be a lot going on in the background. ive heard everything from whistling to clanging of plates. also seems that you altered a few parts and made some thirds into double notes. keep working on those. it sounds l;ike you have the chops to pull of this piece. all my musical tastes and such aside, it sounded pretty good. you have some potential here. just get it all to a fixed tempo, add in the appropriate parts, and iron out a few parts technique-wise. also, judging from your tastes, consider adding some less virtuosic music to your repertoire. i hate to tell you this, but you cant have a recital composed entirely of encores done by volodos and horowitz. overall, very good. keep working at it.