My first audition... Just can't wait for the crap i'm going to get. https://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=353E432813882E7Cbtw, I am not finished with this peice yet so I did have to make my own ending, and I noticed I rushed sometimes, just never when I am playing.
I'd first iron out the tempo fluctuations. Especially from the end of the middle section when you transition into descending octaves you can really tell there is a tempo difference. Play the whole thing at a steady tempo.
well, the ending run is actually my own run, so who says those last descending octaves are at the same speed?
i don't know what my technique is like or even how to tell, I wasn't really ever taught that, I just find ways to play the notes.
I think the whisting in the backround was my pet bird... he's dead now.
I think you've pushed the capability of this suffering piano to the limit.