I like it. There is this chiming motif and then comes a more capricious part. Then the a bit sad one. Good variety of the moods and styles! Now from 4.00 it sounds Prokofieff-like, very good grasp! hehe, this accelerando near 5.45 sounds very humoristic. Yeah, the return of the chiming motif gives the whole the character of a rondo. Good idea! Well what I don't like so much is the sound of the piano.Your playing would deserve a better one!Though then you would perhaps not have the organ sound. All in all a very original capricious piece!Cheers Pianowolfi
Hey man, I'd been meaning to comment on this one for a long time but I've been rather preoccupied with school. I'm really enjoying listening to this! I've gotten to the "march" like part. Sounds like it would fit in in Star Wars or something where someone is hiding from Storm Troopers. haha. Anyway, I've noticed a lot of improvement in your adventurousness in harmony. Rhythmically much of this improvisation is somewhat less incisive than your Lotus Dance or whatever it was called haha, still very good *edit* I take that back. The rhythms rule. Anyway great work I look forward to hearing more of your stuff. -Derek*edit* Wow, I'm even enjoying the Alberti bass part. I like when it changes to a different "time signature".at 12:03 is an awesome rhythmic and harmonic shift/passage. great work dude