Coal on Xmas-Composition

[instromp]

New comp. of mine. It's in dminor, i thought it would give off the tone i was looking for.

It has a repetitive theme which i did variations ( or attempted )

Feedback/comments/critique



(I had the mic kinda close so pls excuse the thud sound u might hear since my keys sre weighted.)

[pianistimo]

you're very creative.  the first loud part sounds like 'coal on x-mas.'  you didn't get the present you asked for?  what happened? anyways - you're a good composer.  keep it up.

[instromp]

you're very creative.  the first loud part sounds like 'coal on x-mas.'  you didn't get the present you asked for?  what happened? anyways - you're a good composer.  keep it up.

Thanks Pianistimo  .

Nahh nothing happened, i was trying to compose something "jolly" and  major keys are harder for me to compose in for some odd reason . So i went and did a minor comp. and since minors give off that sad sound, why not go ahead and name it coal on xmas ,haha.