Nice, sensible playing. I think, the melody could sound more expressive, if you introduce the long notes better: think the note, before you play it. There should be the illusion, that a note can begin pianissimo and getting louder. That's physically impossible, but if you think how a violinist or clarinettist would play it, the melody will get much more life in it. Link the notes together with
slow arm movements, not only let the finger fall on the key. Transport the musical tension from the beginning of a melodical phrase til the end of it. It's not easy, I know, but if you aspire it, one will hear it

The repeated chords are a bit too percussive. Even there should the melody (highest note of every chord) sound very cantabile (use pedal, but change on every chord).
I recognized something funny: when you lift the pedal, you lift your
whole leg. That's what I did, when I was in your age. You should be aware, that you have much better control of the pedal, if you only lift your
toes, keeping the heel on the floor.